Chaos in Red

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Postby hobokenbob » Fri Mar 10, 2006 3:35 pm

this isn't what i thought happened before me at all :P
In fairness, we've been building 'ground zeros' near Iraqi mosques since March 2003.

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Postby ReaL » Sat Mar 11, 2006 5:39 am

That was the greatest 4 sentences I have read since the cliff notes for The Notebook.
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Postby nobody_important » Sat Mar 11, 2006 11:47 am

Yup, this is awesome.
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Postby callius » Tue Mar 14, 2006 3:44 am

Superb, utterly, and completely, superb.

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Postby hobokenbob » Tue Mar 14, 2006 12:55 pm

I had alot of fun working off denihilist's last line. I kinda wish I knew what the tone of his first three were though :P
In fairness, we've been building 'ground zeros' near Iraqi mosques since March 2003.

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Postby . » Sun Mar 19, 2006 9:05 pm

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hobo
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She nervously stared at the light and the light stared back, bathing her face and the cabin of the car in its malevolent red glow. After a moment of panicked hesitation as it turned green, and she tore off through intersection, tires screeching. She momentarily glanced over at the Colt 45 cradled in the passenger seat, glinting with the passing of the street lights, and thought for the hundredth time about how this was all going to play out.

“I have to get close,” she thought as her tongue slowly licked her blood red lipstick “to make sure I don’t miss. He’ll open the door for me, but not all the way so I’ll have to play the maiden in distress. Get inside the living room and get the door closed. Will the neighbors hear? Will I even care if they do? All I care about is that he pays for what he did, after that…”

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Postby hobokenbob » Wed Mar 29, 2006 4:22 pm

i'd like to say that even if i totally did a crazy ivan on the plot, at least I tried to put in as much 'red imagery' as possible. (if i recall plut said she'd be drawing with red and black inks so i immediately was thinking "sin city" from the get go.)
In fairness, we've been building 'ground zeros' near Iraqi mosques since March 2003.

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Postby . » Thu Mar 30, 2006 4:19 am

Yeah, with your writing, I am quite close to just colouring all the panels red with just a couple white spaces. The opposite of what the rest will probably get.

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Postby Token » Tue Apr 18, 2006 11:32 pm

Don't make me tap my foot. I'll do it.
I swear it.
I don't think I'm alone when I say I'd like to see more and more planets fall under the ruthless domination of our solar system.

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Postby . » Wed Apr 19, 2006 4:09 am

I have no idea what you're talking about. Yeah, that's the ticket.



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Postby pablo banquo » Tue May 02, 2006 5:05 am

[smackdown]I'll show you chaos in red in a minute![/smackdown]
i before e except after a few beers

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Postby . » Tue May 02, 2006 8:39 pm

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Druhim
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He can go on a one man killing spree across the country for all I care. Selfish? Sure. I'm a selfish asshole and all I care about is getting my revenge on him even if it means he's going to take it out on some unfortunate, unsuspecting schmucks later on.

Law of the jungle baby, the weak are eaten by the strong. He caught me in a moment of weakness and I'll never forget what he did but I'm just going to show him just how fucking strong I am and how pathetically weak he really is. I will be implacable, I will be patient and when he thinks he's safest, I will strike. I won't kill him though, I want to do so much more to him and I want him to live a long life with which to ponder what I'll have done to him.

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Postby Bag of Ass » Tue May 02, 2006 8:45 pm

I'm still trying to figure out how it goes from where it is now to how it came to me.
08) Druhim
09) GOOR
10) Kauser
11) Sporky
12) Buny
13) pablo
14) BoA

I'm guessing Kauser had something to do with it. In any case, I've been talking to Bunyip about it and the way it comes to me is essentially the way he left it. I guess pablo doesn't massively change the story's direction. I didn't really change it either; mostly just changed the tentacle creature into a cockroach man.

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Postby pablo banquo » Wed May 03, 2006 6:21 am

Yeah I realised afterwards that I gave away too much from the previous sentence.
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Postby . » Thu May 11, 2006 5:09 pm

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Sometimes when I get angry I also develop a strong desire for ice cream. And pain. At 2:47 A.M. I walk down to the Baskin Robbins and break through their window. I reach into the vat of peanut butter and chocolate flavoured milk product; it soothes my bleeding flesh. It is delicious but I vomit twice. Feeling more like a respectable human being I shower in a motel and contemplate how I will not kill that man in the worst way possible.

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Postby Lethe » Thu May 11, 2006 7:24 pm

So angsty!

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Postby Bag of Ass » Wed Jul 26, 2006 4:40 pm

yeah so yeah, what's the deal here

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Postby Token » Wed Jul 26, 2006 4:55 pm

Second.
I don't think I'm alone when I say I'd like to see more and more planets fall under the ruthless domination of our solar system.

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Postby dogmeat » Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:28 am

Turd.

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Postby . » Fri Jul 28, 2006 2:24 am

Just for the record, the notebook I have this all written down in is in a box somewhere in the house. When I am able to unpack said box, I will post more.

I fully admit to being way behind on it. I have never been good on keeping up with things. Ever.


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